Diary Entry 15 - Voiceover progress

Today I e-mailed the script to Mr Ockenden so that he can record the voice-over for the opening scene of 'Candi'. I slightly adapted the final script, adding in directions for him when recording the voice-over. They were mainly just pauses in certain places throughout the script so that we can cut & rearrange the clips so that they fit in with what is being shown in the scene & do so seamlessly.
The e-mail i sent is shown below: