Candi - 1st Draft & Audience Feedback

The first draft for our production 'Candi' is shown below:

We presented the first draft to an ensemble of 9 Media students, & 2 media teachers and gained the following feedback:

Notably good points:

• Camera Shots
• Audience liked the extended takes
• Lighting

Notably Bad Points:

• Shaky camera for some shots

Potential Improvements:

• Some shots are unnecessarily long (may change opinion when voiceover is added)
• Some shots could cut straight to the action (door bang for example)