Pre-Production - Screenplay

Initially, I created a basic script that followed the ideas we had for the opening scene. This is shown below.
Film Noir - Candi - Script Draft 1

This script was then handed to other production teams in order to get their feedback. Their feedback is annotated below:

Chris then made some revisions to the script, creating the second draft. Shown below:

Film Noir - Candi - Script Draft 2

Finally, the script was then passed back to me, where i made revisions that i thought necessary, as well as changing elements that we decided as a group should be changed, such as the lighting of the cigarette, which was changed to the swallowing of the bourbon.
The final draft is shown below:
Film Noir - Candi - Script Draft 3

As a team we have decided that the final script is correct, so we will disperse this to the actor, then progress to use this for the shoot on Thursday.

(Note: when the scripts were uploaded to scribd, some of the formatting has been affected)